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10 StEPS to improving Personal Statements

10 StEPS to improving Personal Statements

Some easy StEPS to improve university essays drawn from my work in English Language Teaching and IELTS assessment, and over two decades of supporting UCAS applications to Russell Group universities:

CONTENT

10. Don’t focus on your family’s or parent’s achievements at the expense of your own.
9. Name the degree programme. Imagine that the admissions tutor does not know what you are applying for.
8. Don’t List achievements without connecting them to the programme.
7. Don’t repeat information shared on the form or elsewhere in the essay.

STRUCTURE

6. Have a clear focus for each paragraph.
5. Don’t use long winded phrases when shorter clearer structures would work equally, if not better.
4. Connect your introduction and conclusion.

LANGUAGE

3. Keep it simple
2. Avoid Slang

EDITING

1. Pay attention to details like punctuation and spacing

StEPS offers a professional Personal Statement/Statement of Purpose review service. Please Book exploratory session for details and to enquire about your eligibility for a free review.

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